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You're the crack in my mirror by ~T-D-P:iconT-D-P:

Categories Literature > Poetry > Spiritual > Open


You’re the crack in my mirror
You're the rain cloud in my sky
You're the nail in my coffin
You're the sand in my eye
You're the bruise on my heart
You're the tear on my face
You're the pill in my stomach
You're the death in this place
You're the envy of my soul
You're the sting in my tears
You're the poison on my lips
You're the birth of my fears
You're the rope round my neck
You're the slit on my throat
You're the source of my hatred
You're the goodbye I wrote
You're the acid in my bathtub
You're the friend of my foes
You're the figment of my imagination
You're the thorn on my rose
You're the bullet in my gun
You're the tip of my knife
You're my sweet suicide
You're the love of my life.
©2004-2009 ~T-D-P
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i done this one ages ago! hope you like it..:clap:

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~shadowkit10 Dec 20, 2004, 4:10:46 AM
I like the twist at the end where we find out its the "love of my life", nice and quick and snappy with good rythm and rhyme, Well written I like it :)

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~T-D-P Dec 20, 2004, 4:13:36 AM
Thank you very much :glomp: :)

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~Silv3rwolf Dec 20, 2004, 9:57:13 AM
The repetition of it makes it build up to the ending which is very nice as well...simple but with a lot of meaning...good job

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~T-D-P Dec 20, 2004, 10:04:50 AM
thanks :D
^^

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~SelflessDefect Dec 20, 2004, 11:47:44 AM
very very awesome :) :+fav:

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~T-D-P Dec 21, 2004, 1:03:02 AM
thanks..aww thanks for the fav too ^^

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~SelflessDefect Dec 21, 2004, 8:34:45 AM
welcome :P

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~T-D-P Dec 21, 2004, 8:35:59 AM
^^

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`coolmarvin Dec 21, 2004, 12:55:51 PM
great! :jawdrop: very good!

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~T-D-P Dec 22, 2004, 5:43:50 AM
thanks :glomp:

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